So these are my very first attempts ever at Haiku   5 comments

raindrop lands
on broken seed
wasted

one brown leaf
hanging on

him and her
together
no love seat

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Posted 30/01/2014 by DarKarsean in haiku, poem, poetic, poetry, Uncategorized

5 responses to “So these are my very first attempts ever at Haiku

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  1. Particularly like the first one, very deep, poignant, thanks for posting, Kevin

  2. Beautifully done, thank you for this work….

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